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Johannes's avatar

Thanks for the insights. I already liked the insights into the book market, but the short dialogue really got me. Nice stuff building a scene with very little.

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Max Malterer's avatar

Thanks Johannes, glad you liked it. I think I’ll play with this scene a bit more. Feels like a perfect practice scene to try out some elements I haven’t focused on much in previous writing. Like giving the reader a sense of the weather that day in a way that underlines the atmosphere of the scene. Or subtle clues about father and son.

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